Years 4–6 pitch · Lesson 5: Communicate

Students refine their advocacy tools, ensuring their message is powered by data and community voices. Through peer review and rehearsals, they prepare...

Years 4–6 pitch · Lesson 5

Years 4–6: tell someone

Ākonga share what they found with an audience beyond the class.

  • Years 4–6 move: Findings communicated to a real audience
  • Evidence it produces: A clear account of what they saw and did
Same topic, Year 7 pitch →Same topic, Years 7–8 band, a shorter route →

Before you plan from this: Te Kete Ako carries three routes through this kaupapa, not two. The lesson body below is currently near-identical to the Year 7 route’s — this panel describes the intended difference between those two, which is not authored yet, so choose between them on year band rather than on this pitch. The third route sits at the Years 7–8 band and is genuinely different in shape: its lessons are noticeably shorter, around half the length of these. All three are kept; none is being retired.

Unit 12 · Week 5

📢 Week 5: Communicate

Students refine their advocacy tools, ensuring their message is powered by data and community voices. Through peer review and rehearsals, they prepare to launch their kaitiaki actions.

Focus Question

How can we make our message convincing for our community?

🎯 Learning Intentions

  • Complete advocacy posters or PSAs with all required elements
  • Strengthen messages by integrating data and direct quotes
  • Provide constructive, rubric-based feedback to peers

✅ Success Criteria

  • My final work includes bird count data and an expert quote
  • I have used at least 3 correctly spelled kupu Māori
  • I can articulate my message in a clear 30-second pitch

🗣️ Kupu / Vocabulary

  • refinement, peer review
  • persuasion, evidence-based
  • kōrero, whāinga (goal)

📚 Curriculum Links

  • English: Writing & Speaking (Persuasion)
  • Mathematics: Data Representation
  • Science: Nature of Science (Communicating)

🎥 Media Anchor (8 mins)

Media Anchor: Communicating a Species Story

Watch: Study how story, science, and emotion are combined to motivate conservation support.

  • What communication technique in this video would strengthen your PSA or poster?
  • Write one sentence that connects evidence with an emotional call to action.

Ngā Mahi - Week 5 Activities

1. Content Deep-Dive (10 mins)

Activity: Final check of evidence. Every student/group must verify they have their Week 2 tally data and Week 3 quote integrated into their work.

  • Data check: Is the bird count prominently displayed?
  • Quote check: Is the community voice clearly attributed?
  • Visual check: Does the design support the message or distract from it?

2. Final Polish & Rehearsal (25 mins)

Activity: Work time to finalize posters or PSA scripts. Followed by a "Pitch Practice" where students rehearse their core message in pairs.

  • Work time: Adding colour, correcting spelling, and final assembly
  • Pitching: 30 seconds to explain the problem, the data, and the action
  • Self-Assessment: Using the Success Criteria to check for missing parts
Kaiako Tip: If doing PSAs, provide a quiet corner for recording or several practice runs to build student confidence with the scientific vocabulary.

3. The Feedback Loop (15 mins)

Activity: A structured "Gallery Walk". Students place their work on desks and circulate to provide "Two Stars and a Wish" using the Poster Rubric.

  • Stars: Identify specific strengths in data use or design
  • Wish: Suggest one small improvement (e.g., "Make the headline bigger")
  • Action: Students make one final revision based on their "wish"

💡 Differentiation Strategies

  • scaffold support: Use sentence starters for peer feedback (e.g., "Your use of data is effective because...")
  • Support: Individual check-ins for students struggling with data placement or bilingual vocabulary
  • Extension: Create a 'Teaser' digital announcement for the school newsletter or social media page

🛠️ Preparation for Action Day

Confirm all logistics for Week 6. Ensure materials (plants, tools, signage bases) are ready, follow up any unanswered whānau notes, and assign students roles for Evidence Capture (photographer, interviewer, data recorder).

📋 Teacher Planning Snapshot

Ngā Whāinga Ako — Learning Intentions

Students will investigate the ecological roles of ngā manu o te taiao — the birds of the natural world — within local habitats, drawing on both science and mātauranga Māori to understand why native birds are taonga and what kaitiakitanga requires of us in their protection.

Ngā Paearu Angitū — Success Criteria

Assess this week against its own criteria above. The unit-wide criteria live once on the unit overview — they are not repeated here, so nobody marks the week against the wrong list.

Differentiation & Inclusion

Scaffold support: A one-page frame: who we are telling, what they think now, what we want them to do. Extension: present beyond the classroom.

ELL / ESOL: Rehearse in pairs; allow reading from notes or playing a recording.

Inclusion: Any mode counts — spoken, drawn, written, recorded, signed or AAC. The evidence is what is assessed.

Mātauranga Māori lens: Manu feathers in taonga such as kahu huruhuru carry obligation as well as beauty — they are held, not owned. If ākonga communicate about taonga species this week, they should say who holds that knowledge rather than speaking for them.

Prior knowledge: Best used after introductory ecology concepts. Connects well to science food webs and biodiversity units.

Curriculum alignment

  • Ecosystems — Knowledge: Biotic and abiotic factors in ecosystems can affect the distribution and abundance of organisms; changes in one part can affect the balance and wellbeing of the whole system.